King of Ithaca

The story is well enough told, but there's never any sense of danger to the main characters. Eperitus is handy as a means of explaining things to the outsider/reader, but everything seems a bit too convenient.
He is quickly taken into Odysseus' confidence, eavesdrops on a private conversation with a goddess, and constantly turns up just in time to save the day.
Could have done with more of a sense of suspense or danger.